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We sit among blackened stones.
We watch the sky turn to ash.
The ash becomes dust,
And the dust is settling.

The horizon is marked by fire.
The forests have all gone.
We weep for all that is lost.
We walk on.

The fire becomes hot.
The ash becomes thick.
Our breath is slowly ending.
I cannot go further
I cannot walk on.
You carry me beyond.

The dead stare upon us,
from their holy resting places.
You collapse and lie still.
I crawl on,
dragging myself to the horizon.
I enter the flames,
In one last blaze of glory,
And watch as the sky falls.
Feed back is much appreciated, pretty please? :)
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GreenRainGypsykinz52 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
Amazing!!! Beautifully done!!!!
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Another-Hitchhiker Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012   Writer
This is absolutely wonderful. It gripped me from the very beginning and ended on a perfect note of glory and despair. Bravo. :heart:
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philippv745 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Writer
Excellently structured.
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philippv745 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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WhiteWolf614 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love this, faved as soon as I read it!
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philippv745 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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Phongo94Xapa Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
That was so awesome
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philippv745 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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Phongo94Xapa Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
your welcome
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